hehe
It gives the impression that the writer is uneducated and sloppy and thus the whole content of the text appears to be uninteresting.
Don,t need to use two " and" ' s there. I would personally written
It gives the impression that the writer is uneducated, sloppy and thus the whole content of the text, appears to be uninteresting.
Two commas there, I would either place the last after " text" , or after " be" .
But please dont use me as an example for future writing :P I am sloppy when it comes to forums.
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or if you want to use two ands, you should definitly have a comma after thus
there are quite some different ways to do it, but you should definitly have one there. Or maybe your that kinda person that has no pauses in your sentences and talk them roboticly out?
< Message edited by Cetra -- 27 May 06 18:03:49 >