Well, first of all, I guess, nice try, Adam. But why write the article when by your own admission you' re not even of average skill at the game?
Secondly, I' m getting sick of crap like this (and I' m used to it from a fair number of tankheaded users of this forum, but from someone who fancies himself a journalist?):
But some existing weapons have been enhanced since Halo 2; the Needler for example, while still looking gay, is more powerful and might actually kill people this time around.
Using a descriptive term of a segment of the population as a disparaging term is unprofessional at best. To use the term ' gay' as meaning ' lame,' ' stupid,' etc. isn' t something anyone should do, much less someone who writes for a living.
Naturally I realize I' ll get flamed for bringing this up, and the flaming generally will be comprised of bad grammar and misspelled words, as well as accusations of being gay (which I' m not but I' m confident enough in my own identity not to disparage someone else' s), but I' m not afraid to speak out against screw-ups and in this choice of words you damaged your credibility as a professional and Kikizo' s reputation as a legitimate news site.