Let' s make a story/comic

EDIT: tomarrow I will clena this thread up a bti in order to make it easier to follow the sotry and ideas being made End Edit

Ok so obviously Im bored senceless to help cure this I' ve decided to get started with a story. A Kikizo community made story. I' ll do the writing and drawing, but will seek anyones and everyones input to progress the story in short stages.

It shouldnt be too hard. I' ll leave simple instructions needed to progress the story and you give your input. I' ll see who' s I like the most or group some and then create a narrative and panel for it. The repeat.

But first we need to start some developement:
Character
Name:
Sex:
Age:

Setting
Time Period:
General Location:

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I know most people in Kikizo dont give 2 shits about this kinda stuff. Regardless Im gonna give it a go...fuck I need to kill this waiting time somehow.

Character:
Name: Jack Thompson
Gender: possibly Male
Age: Old

Time period: 2008
General Location:Story ends in a van down by the River

A story on how one group of gamers banned together and ruined the evil lawyer.

Character:
Name: Nitro/Majik/Liam
Sex: Male
Age: 24

Setting
Time Period: 2007
General Location: England/Canada.

I think he would make a interesting read on his adventures. and other pursuits.

Change is inevitable. Except from a vending machine.

Viva La Revolution! erm, I mean Viva La Wii!

Character: Some Japanese guy
Name: Hwan Chen Lee
Sex: Male
Age: 19

Setting: Japan
Time Period: 2007
General Location: Dark side of Tokyo where shady deeling and what not go down

Arite some takers. I shall take a bit form the first 2 ideas. The only reaosn I avoid yours fish is because I know very little of Japan. Tho As I educate myself I may be able to put him in later on.

Name: Liam N. Majik
Age:24
Sex:Male
Location: Canada 2007

Jack Thompson will be the Main villian of the story, Having been expelled from the U.S. and cast off into Canada. Liam will be an up and coming game journalist with dream of becoming a top tier game developer. Thompson will be the ever present force trying to veer him off course.

I' ll be back with a few test drawings for the characters and the first panal (arriving in canada). From there I' ll explain hwo we will move forward.

Im actually not dead set on the style yet I may keep this one but Im gonna play around for another hour or so before I get real into it.

Im think IM probabyl gonna go ahead with this style...

yup im keeping style 2. its more fun.

This comic needs to Have Adam Doree in it too, since the kikizo effect is in place. Ya know.

but lets not turn it into a slideshow of you drawing everybody in the forums!

Change is inevitable. Except from a vending machine.

Viva La Revolution! erm, I mean Viva La Wii!

This is my first time making a fully colored comic with background and fancy effects...anyways here we go. Departure:


" Hmm 15 minutes huh? Well i guess that gives me time to look around the airport shops."

Now the format of this comic will be a sort of ' choose you own adventure' deal. We are given a situation (I promise it will be more interesting but for now we need to get theball rolling) and its up to you all to decide what happens next. Sometimes it will be kept in context using multiple choice, others times it will be open for ideas. The idea that catches the best will be chosen and then drawn into the next panel/s

Give details liek who he may bump into where he is or will be the condtion he' s in etc etc etc, be creative go wild have fun.

So here we go-
Liam' s got 15 minutes to scout around or just wait at the terminal. Where to?

He walks into stores and picks up the worst things to occupy you on a plane, aka: a season of Lost or the Alive dvd. work with that.

Change is inevitable. Except from a vending machine.

Viva La Revolution! erm, I mean Viva La Wii!

Silentbomber
-He walks into stores and picks up the worst things to occupy you on a plane, aka: a season of Lost or the Alive dvd. work with that.

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" Fuck this! I' m heading to the terminal!"

Liam runs off to his flight to freedom, only to be stopped part way by a tall blonde sobbing man. " Adam?!"

--" Why Liam? Why are you leaving us here!? Ah ah gawd I' m gonna miss you so so much! Call me as soon as you reach your destination......Don' t forget. And don' t forget any of us." --

With that Adam ran off only once looking back.

" Hmm well then that was awkward."

Suddenly over the PA System -Flight 17 to Canada now boarding, All Passenegrs please report to theterminal-

" O fuck!" Liam Takes off. Sprinting full speed til:

Your Turn

Character: Some Japanese guy
Name: Hwan Chen Lee
Sex: Male
Age: 19

Setting: Japan
Time Period: 2007
General Location: Dark side of Tokyo where shady deeling and what not go down

They make a movie like that atleast twice a year

Hey contribute at least one thing before you start up here!!!!

As is the way of the rules of the thread of miiiine...that I just made up now!

Hey contribute at least one thing before you start up here!!!!

As is the way of the rules of the thread of miiiine...that I just made up now!

Okay.... He' s.... No, she' s an indian girl trying to get revenge on a casino owner named Psunja Uno for stealing her grandpa Dances with goats' casino with her sidekick, a cow named bobby

something about trying to join the mile high club but walking into the wrong bathroom and there being a HUUUUUGE lady in there and then getting pwnt.

MB-

something about trying to join the mile high club but walking into the wrong bathroom and there being a HUUUUUGE lady in there and then getting pwnt.

Modified it just a bit since he wa slast runnign thru the airport and hadnt yet boarded. She is on the same flight however.

Anyhow today we find Liam, poor poor Liam, get involved in a full sprint crash. The women a bit of a beast of 56 years old.

A. Does she freak out and get pummel poor Liam

B. Does she fall madly in love with Liam having just given her somthign she hasnt had in years

B

B and then A

I' ll get to the drawings in a sec but first off:

How come no one told me the hair was green? Help a colorblind artist! :(

Mass, over here in the UK we have a Jack thompson wannabe called Boris Johnson, he is a middle aged Politician with bright blonde hair and a dress sense that is smart but slobish, I will try and find a pic for you, was thinking he could be jack Thompsons Bitch or something seeing as they both love to have a go at Video games.

Shazaam!

The 50-something lady is a closet S&M freak.